In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss some of the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
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. In my opinion, the benefits of taking a Add a hyphen
self-development
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outweigh the drawbacks, for the following reasons.
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with, in terms of personal development, having a Linking Words
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year
has certain advantages. Use synonyms
Firstly
, young adults can escalate their success motivation because a Linking Words
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reinvigorates them and leaves them full of motivation to start their university life. It actually contributes to Use synonyms
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the improvement of their grades
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In addition
, a Linking Words
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provides opportunities for young adults to learn soft Use synonyms
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In addition
, a Linking Words
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may have certain drawbacks since it necessitates extensive planning. Use synonyms
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of all, young Linking Words
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are encouraged to prepare extra financial planning during the Use synonyms
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In conclusion, despite some of the drawbacks of taking a Linking Words
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such
as preparing extra planning in terms of finance and academics, I believe that the advantages of taking a Linking Words
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outweigh its disadvantages. The benefits include aiding young Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite