Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think the cause of this? What possible solutions can you suggest

It is concerned that many

law breakers

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become

offenders

again after releasing from jail because of

lack

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of rehabilitation and supervision. The main reason for engaging

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activities in the

first

place is unemployment.It is true that a

first

time

offender should be punished for his crime but apart from the punishing government needs to train them to develop new

skills

and to understand deeply the moral values of a human being.

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they are not given a chance to retain

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which lead to

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time

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to commit crime again because of the financial struggle they are facing after the release. Other main factors are mingling with other criminals itself increase the possibility of criminal intentions and some

time

law breakers

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feel it difficult to find jobs because of the social stigma. Actually,according to my point of

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there are two solutions that can be implemented by the government authorities or

policy makers

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.

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one is the rehabilitation of the prisoners.The programs that are created for

offenders

should be focused on developing life

skills

,social

skills

and most importantly moral

skills

.

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important fact is to observe the

first

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offenders

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jail for a period of

time

. As

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are closely watched they would not be able to engage

any

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crime. Apart from the government policies, individuals in

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society

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a great responsibility to prevent crimes as

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example parents could maintain strict family values and monitor their children on daily basis. So in conclusion, rehabilitation

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first

time

offenders

and reoffend eta to find their place in

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society and reintegrate with the people.

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close supervision by the authorities can prevent

law breaking

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because they are aware that they are closely watched.