Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taugh to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It if often think that,

competition

spirit in

children

helps them to grow in life. Certain concerned individuals feel that

competition

mindset in

children

needs to encourage, but there is another school of thought which believe that helping the

nature

of

children

is more important than

competition

. In

this

,

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I will consider both points of view and conclude that helping in

nature

is more important as an individual in

society

. The primary reason, most of the peoples thinks that

competition

spirit needs to enhance is because of the fact that it is going to help

children

to grow to become more prominent and achieve the best suitable position.

In addition

, As per psychology, a competitive mindset thinks of new ways to win in difficult situations.

This

not only helps the

children

to work in the hard situation

also

find new innovative ideas. But of ,course there is an opinion

on the contrary

also

which suggest that co-operate

nature

is more important than

competition

in individuals in order to build a

society

.The major psychological difference in these people is to think for others as well. In order to build a

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society

it is crucial to think of others as well.

For example

, from the research of several scientific universities, the data collected from

this

study indicate that helping

nature

not only find the ways but

also

a basic building block for

society

. In conclusion,

although

there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences to

this

, several related problems can be anticipated.Still, in my opinion, co-operate

nature

of the individual is more important than the competitive spirit.