In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. Do you agree?
In
the
recent decades, the amount of men and women with Correct article usage
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of
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health
conditions associated to
fast foods has increased dramatically in many nations. It is argued that states should charge fast Change preposition
with
food
companies more tax
because of their reposibilities
of Correct your spelling
responsibilities
this
situation. This
essay totally agrees with that statement because these illnesses cost the health
service too much money and increasing the price of junk food
would reduce the demand for it.
Obesity related
illnesses cost the taxpayer billions of Add a hyphen
Obesity-related
dollar
every year. Fix the agreement mistake
dollars
People
who eat too much fast food
more
likely to suffer from costly diseases associated with being overweight. Add a missing verb
are more
As a result
, they have to go to hospital
more regularly for treatment and Correct article usage
the hospital
this
puts a strain on the health
service. (explanation) For example
, a large proportion of the United Kingdon’s National Health
Service budget is spent on preventable, obesity-related diseases, such
as heart disease and diabetes
Another reason why fast food
restaurants should pay extra tax
is to raise the cost in order to decrease demand. Any extra tax
would be added to the normal price of the food
, and as prices go up, fewer people
will be able to afford to buy fatty food
. Therefore
, this
would reduce the amount of junk food
people
eat and the result would be a Correct your spelling
healthier
heathier
nation. The UK government, Correct your spelling
healthier
for instance
, introduced a ‘sugar tax
’ on sugary soft drinks in an attempt to fight the obesity epidemic.
In conclusion, many people
consuming fast food
develop health
issues and it is essential to put higher tax
because of the high pressure on Fix the agreement mistake
taxes
national
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the national
health
budget and decreasing the fast
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fast-food
food
demandSubmitted by hbui19982016 on
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