Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing ttaffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that traffic congestion and pollution problem has been becoming an alarming
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across the globe.To combat
with
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these problems,some
people
suggest ,increasing the
prices
of fuel will be appropriate
measures
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.But I believe that improvement in public transportation and fixing the
amount
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of fuels are effective
measures
than increasing the cost of oil.
On
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first
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perspective, why raising the
prices
of fuel is not
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solution is that it is short term
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.It may
helps
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to decrease the
vehicles
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on road but
this
will give birth to inflation.
For example
,in developing countries like India ,whereas public transportation is bad in quality and
people
relies on owned vehicles ,if petrol
prices
increases, it will cause the impact on
people
's
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,they will find
difficulty
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to make
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bread and butter. The
long run
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solutions are which helps to control the road congestion.
Firstly
,
government
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should
improving
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the
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public transport and should make it cheaper and improving the conditions like
installation
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the installation
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of air conditioners and provide more services,so
people
feels
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comfortable and convenient.
Besides
this
,regimes should
fixed
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the basic
prices
of petrol and removes the extra taxes on it ,which would
be helps
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to decrease the level of inflation in
country
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. To conclude,it makes
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of both government and individuals to stop making air quality worsen by taking
initiative
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initiatives
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like give more prioritisation to public transportation and fixing the
prices
of fuels are more effective
measures
rather than rising the cost of petrol.
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