You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers In your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion, Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town Centre is different from most other town centers offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope
this
letter finds you well.I am writing about the article which was published in the last
Monday newspaper. I would like to argue the claim which was demonstrated in your paper.
I would like to thank you for the article about my country. Although
your point of view about the similarity of all city centres in Iran was not true, I believe India is the most appropriate choice for tourists to visit, due to
the numerous monuments all over the country, as you have mentioned.
Let me explain the error in more detail. All the downtowns in my country have their own special features. For instance
, the Mumbai city centre is more related to businesses and usually is too crowded, while
the Delhi downtown is surrounded by a variety of historic places, indicating our ancient culture.
I would like to invite you to India. I will be able to guide you through several city centres, and also
provide you with useful information about the different downtown backgrounds.
I hope you will consider my request favourably.
Yours sincerely
AviSubmitted by avibhadiyadra on
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Task Achievement
Ensure consistency in geographical accuracy - the letter starts discussing Iran but moves to discuss India. Be clear and consistent in your references.
Coherence & Cohesion
Maintain consistency in naming conventions (e.g., center/centre) to ensure clarity throughout the letter.
Task Achievement
Consider adding more specific examples or details about what makes the mentioned city centers unique to strengthen your argument.
Coherence & Cohesion
To enhance the letter's impact, consider closing with a more compelling statement or call to action, inviting further engagement or discussion.
Coherence & Cohesion
The letter opens and closes politely and appropriately, adhering to the formal tone.
Task Achievement
Successfully addresses the three main tasks outlined, providing a counterargument, examples of uniqueness, and an invitation.