You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers In your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion, Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town Centre is different from most other town centers offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope

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letter finds you well.I am writing about the article which was published in the

last

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Monday newspaper. I would like to argue the claim which was demonstrated in your paper. I would like to thank you for the article about my country.

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your point of view about the similarity of all city centres in Iran was not true, I believe India is the most appropriate choice for tourists to visit,

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the numerous monuments all over the country, as you have mentioned. Let me explain the error in more detail. All the downtowns in my country have their own special features.

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, the Mumbai city centre is more related to businesses and usually is too crowded,

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the Delhi downtown is surrounded by a variety of historic places, indicating our ancient culture. I would like to invite you to India. I will be able to guide you through several city centres, and

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provide you with useful information about the different downtown backgrounds. I hope you will consider my request favourably. Yours sincerely Avi

avibhadiyadraSat Apr 20 2024

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Task Achievement

Ensure consistency in geographical accuracy - the letter starts discussing Iran but moves to discuss India. Be clear and consistent in your references.

Coherence & Cohesion

Maintain consistency in naming conventions (e.g., center/centre) to ensure clarity throughout the letter.

Task Achievement

Consider adding more specific examples or details about what makes the mentioned city centers unique to strengthen your argument.

Coherence & Cohesion

To enhance the letter's impact, consider closing with a more compelling statement or call to action, inviting further engagement or discussion.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter opens and closes politely and appropriately, adhering to the formal tone.

Task Achievement

Successfully addresses the three main tasks outlined, providing a counterargument, examples of uniqueness, and an invitation.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

184 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

ubiquitous
homogenized
historical landmarks
monuments
festivals
unique atmosphere
independent businesses
traditional crafts
commercialized
hidden gems
town planning policies
distinct identity
cuisines
cultural diversity

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