These days, more people are going to university than in the past. They start work later in life and with higher qualifications. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?
The world has become a very well-connected places thanks to the developments in education. Due to training, nowadays, a lot of people study the college.
Then
, they begin work later in their life and with more capable
. Yet, there are both advantages and disadvantages of going to college.
The advantage of graduating Replace the word
capacity
at
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from
university
is more advantageous. Students graduating from the university
know more information than others. This
situation will positively affect their career. For instance
, they earn much more than workmates and their life will be comfortable and available. For example
, according to a recent article in The Times, graduates from Stanford University
are more capable and have much deeper knowledge as compared to a professional having 5 years of experience in the industry.
On the other hand
, there are disadvantage
of going to the higher educational credential Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantages
such
as missing family and friends because when you start a university
and then
work a job, you don’t
have enough time to spend with them. Therefore
, you will miss them. Also
, you will not have time to start a family owing to your old age. Some
countries, pupils Change preposition
In some
don’t
want to go to college because they don’t
get married and they don’t
have a child or children. That’s why,
the rate of increase in the country's influence is decreasing.
To sum Remove the comma
apply
up
everything that has been started so far, the number of people who graduate there is increasing. Add a comma
,up
However
, there are pros and cons of
going to school. WhileChange preposition
to
,
the benefits of achieving higher educational credentials and starting a Remove the comma
apply
late career
are enormous, the downsides should not be overlooked.Add a hyphen
late-career
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