Write about the following topic: Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Developed

nations

are the

nations

where the disparity between the rich and the poor is at the lowest and the

people

of

this

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these

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nations

enjoy a better standard of

livng

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living

then

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than

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the rest of the

nations

in the world. Whereas, the nation in which the disparity between the rich and the poor is very high and

people

have to suffer even for their basic rights is known as a developing nation. Currently,

India

is at the developing stage. It is true that the developed

nations

help the developing

nations

by

providng

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providing

them

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loan

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for their development projects and it is the duty of

this

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these

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developed

nations

to help

this poor

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this poor nation

these poor nations

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nations

, but sometimes money is not the solution. It is a

well known

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well-known

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fact that money cannot solve all our problems and I agree with it. The developed

nations

should look beyond the financial aid and think about helping the

people

of

this

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these

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poor

countries

. I agree with

this

statement that the rich

countries

should help the poor

countries

, not only financially but by using other means as well. The rich

countries

have the technology to develop their infrastructure in unbelievably quick time and the same should be shared with the poor

countries

so that they can develop their poor

infrstructure

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infrastructure

. By

infrastucuture

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infrastructure

, I mean the development of transportation services, sanitary services,

seawage

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sewage

systems, corporate parks, etc. One of the best

example

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of

rich

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the rich

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country helping

the

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a

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poor country was seen in the

70's

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'70s

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: The state of Gujarat located in

India

had faced a huge earthquake and the calamity had destroyed many villages and cities of Gujarat, killing thousands of

people

. Japan came to the aid of

India

and helped them develop their infrastructure. Japan

also

provided technology that helped to detect

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an earthquake

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earthquake

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earthquakes

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in advance and

also

helped in building

earthquake proof

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earthquake-proof

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buildings to avoid

such

huge

calamity

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calamities

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in future.

This

single gesture of Japan helped

in

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apply

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India

to rebuild the state of Gujarat and

also

saved the lives of thousands of

people

in the coming future.