It is predicted that robots are going to become increasingly important in our lives. How could robots be used in the future? Will this development be a positive or negative development?

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Many types of

robots

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are developed to help people and predicted that they are going to play an important role in the coming years. I believe that if

robots

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could simulate the potential of humans like driving and that

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will be a net negative development. In the case of

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robocalls

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or self-driving

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, they are highly likely to take over the job positions of citizens,

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as lorry

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, taxi

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, and bus

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is due to the fact that

cars

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that use sensors and cameras to drive themselves can improve safety by reducing the likelihood of human errors.

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, while the number of car accidents could be reduced by

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technology, they would be able to cause redundancies in driving jobs which could be the beginning of the unemployment crisis.

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, if self-driving

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are allowed to transport in a city, some

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could be laid off as their works are taking place by artificial intelligence which has more precisely. Clearly, these advancements in robotics and AI will have a negative impact on society. Even though some may dream about the modern world

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driven by intelligent

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, the fact is that we will see a rise in unemployment as workers in various industries are replaced by

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, in Singapore, the municipal government provided 20 driverless

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to minimize automobile accidents.

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, even the number of reckless driving accidents was delined but they

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got an unexpected problem that was the surge of jobless

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for 30% which led to poverty issues, higher crime rates, and mental illness. I think that if

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could work

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of humans in many industries that

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will be a negative change. I predict a worse, more difficulty in finding jobs with the increased usage of robotics

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

302 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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