The best way to travel in a foreign city is by using public transportation. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, most
of
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the
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people
love to
travel
in
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a foreign
city
.
People
can see beautiful sceneries that do not have in their own
city
.
For example
,
peoples
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from Kuala Lumpur get to see
a beautiful sandy beaches
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in Langkawi. There are a lot of ways that
people
can
use
to
travel
around
the
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foreign
city
.
People
can
use
private
transportation
or
a
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public
transportation
. In my opinion, the best way to
travel
around
the
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foreign
city
is by using public
transportation
. On one hand,
people
that love
use
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private
transportation
to
travel
around
the
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foreign country have their own valid reason. By using private
transportation
, they can
plans
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the journey by themselves.
For instance
, they can plan the exact
time
they want to leave or going back to the place that they stay.
In addition
,
travel
by private
transportation
is more comfortable than public
transport
. Some
people
need
a
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comfortable
places
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place

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while travelling.
For example
, elderly
people
and pregnant women need a comfortable place so that they can enjoy the view while travelling with other family members.
Furthermore
,
people
who
use
private
transportation
get to save a lot of
time
. They can reduce their travelling
time
and do not have to wait for public
transport
to arrive.
On the other hand
, my personal view on travelling around
the
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foreign
city
by public
transport
is
people
can save a lot of money.
This
is because
,
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fee for
the
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public
transportation
cheaper
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than private
transportation
. Fees for public
transportation
in Malaysia are around RM 3 to RM 10. The journey fee always depends on their own destination.
Moreover
,
people
can prevent
from
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air pollution if they
travel
by public
transport
, which is
less
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fewer

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chemical substances like carbon monoxide are
produce
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.
This
chemical substance is bad for the environment and could lead to
the
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global warming. Other than that, travelling by public
transport
can help
people
to be more independent.
People
who are
travel
by public
transport
need to know their own route and which station should they go
but
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also
when is the exact
time
they need to be at the station. In conclusion, I believe that
travel
by public
transport
is more adventurous and fun rather than private
transportation
.
However
,
people
need to know the consequences that they may face while travelling by using public
transport
or private
transportation
.

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