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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it’s unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Triumphant
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sportsmen
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sports men
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sportsmen
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 and women take
home
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a home
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enormous
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amount
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amounts
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 of
money
 compared to other occupations.Some individuals argue that
this
 is
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in order
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inorder
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 whereas others say that they are not justified to earn a
lot
 of
money
.
To begin
 with, the main advantage of being a sportsman is the amount of
money
that is
 entitled to an individual following a given performance and
also
 the fame that accompanies
such
 performance.
In addition
, collections that come from: sports tourism, sponsorships and advertisements provide
a lucrative avenues
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lucrative avenues
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 for earning more.
Moreover
, most
sportsmen
 are physically fit and healthy
thus
 they are able to increase their stock of health reducing the number of visits to
hospital
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the hospital
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 due to illness
this
 later translate to improved working days on their career and
thus
 more
money
 in their pockets.
For instance
,
tennis
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the tennis
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ball
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ballplayer
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player
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players
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 who earn through sponsorships and stays healthy.
Therefore
,
sportsmen
 are able to take home a
lot
 of
money
 comparatively.
On the contrary
, Other
school
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schools
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 of thought argue that
sportsmen
 should not earn a
lot
 because the amount of time spent in class for
a
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an
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 academic is minimal
that is
 they are half baked.
Moreover
,when they are injured they stand a chance of
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losing
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loosing
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losing
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 their profession.
For instance
,a football player who
spend
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 most of his or her time
in
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on
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 the football pitch and later accidentally gets an injury.
Thus
,in the view of the given reasons
sportsmen
 should not take a
lot
 for the owners to realize. In conclusion,Not only that sports depends on talents but
also
 it's an important career that can promote individual well being as well as
economy
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the economy
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 of the country;It should be accorded the relevant support by the government.
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