Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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People tend to have controversial debates about whether we should
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plenty of academic knowledge or not. While some persons think
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action could bring huge benefits to society and communities, I personally think it is better if we deliberately
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our valuable
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. On the one hand, free sharing of
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world contributes many undeniable values to academic communities. One of
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meanings is that more people in developing countries have more opportunities to get free access to read some publications or other's research, which they are not able to afford for authors.
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sharing provides scientists
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perspectives and experience to support their future findings.
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, sharing
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or knowledge
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bring back numerous values to us.
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, some KOLs or entrepreneurs post their books or experience accumulated after many years on social media without asking for subscriptions or payments.
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link them to larger networks with people in the same field.
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, they were paid off with possible contracts or any collaborations in the future. Illegally
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, I believe that we should consider carefully and
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our achievements selectively due to several reasons.
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and foremost is the security of our private and personal
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that could be leaked easily and used by some hackers to earn money or deceive others.
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, many project
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or presentations of scientists are faked or advertised on social media by some individuals to charge fees illegally because scientists
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a community and are unable to control others to copy or modify with their products.
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, the potential risk of free
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is unfair to many colleges or institutions which has to pay
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fee for journals or publishers. That explains why in developed countries, universities and companies are required to buy memberships for their employees and not
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others so that it can ensure
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equity for everyone to attain knowledge. In conclusion,
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sharing a large amount of
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has some pros in some ways, it seems to me that we should select and protect our effort with all the things we
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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