Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People tend to have controversial debates about whether we should
share
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plenty of academic knowledge or not. While some persons think
this
action could bring huge benefits to society and communities, I personally think it is better if we deliberately
share
our valuable
information
. On the one hand, free sharing of
information
in
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world contributes many undeniable values to academic communities. One of
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meanings is that more people in developing countries have more opportunities to get free access to read some publications or other's research, which they are not able to afford for authors.
Therefore
,
this
sharing provides scientists
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perspectives and experience to support their future findings.
Furthermore
, sharing
information
or knowledge
also
bring back numerous values to us.
For example
, some KOLs or entrepreneurs post their books or experience accumulated after many years on social media without asking for subscriptions or payments.
This
does not only help them to enrich their writing skills but
also
link them to larger networks with people in the same field.
As a result
, they were paid off with possible contracts or any collaborations in the future. Illegally
On the other hand
, I believe that we should consider carefully and
share
our achievements selectively due to several reasons.
First
and foremost is the security of our private and personal
information
that could be leaked easily and used by some hackers to earn money or deceive others.
For instance
, many project
proposal
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or presentations of scientists are faked or advertised on social media by some individuals to charge fees illegally because scientists
share
freely
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a community and are unable to control others to copy or modify with their products.
Secondly
, the potential risk of free
information
is unfair to many colleges or institutions which has to pay
monthly
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fee for journals or publishers. That explains why in developed countries, universities and companies are required to buy memberships for their employees and not
share
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to
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others so that it can ensure
the
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equity for everyone to attain knowledge. In conclusion,
although
sharing a large amount of
information
has some pros in some ways, it seems to me that we should select and protect our effort with all the things we
share
.

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