The widespread use of the internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems connected with using the web? what solutions can you suggest?

In the

last

decade, the global society has been attracted by the popularity of digital

media

. Some opine that the easier

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individuals accessing their social

media

accounts, the greater negative impacts they will obtain.

This

essay will discuss several issues caused by the website and how the members of society can address

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First

and foremost, human psychology experts are concerned that people who

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spent more than a half of their day to surf the Internet using their gadgets

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are deemed to experience mental health issue.

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, most elementary students in Indonesia has been given

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authority by their parents to use numerous kind of high-technology devices and create a social

media

account. As a consequence, they tend to stay active in their Instagram or Facebook accounts every single day and create digital content

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every

second

,

although

they have other important responsibilities to do. These

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lead to the appearance of depression and anxiety that

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However

, there are several measures

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be taken to overcome

this

issue.

Firstly

, parents need to be more active in controlling their children daily activities.

For example

, when the

first

time the youth are exposed to

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social

media

, it is better to set the limit of the digital network access time,

such

as not more than an hour per day.

Thus

, the youngster can manage their daily screen period and reducing the possibility of damaging their well-being.

Secondly

, the government

also

can promote a new campaign related to outdoor activities since it influences all

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of communities in the region to not highly attach to

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technology and the digital world.

This

movement will be beneficial not only physically but

also

mentally. To conclude

then

,

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even though

there are a number of drawbacks

as a result

of the modern era, I personally believe that

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can be

tackle

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easily by improving

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family supervision and initiate a national healthy campaign.