Some university now offer their courses on internet so that people can study online.Is it a positive or negative development?

The current tertiary institutions offer virtual learning to their students to allow
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of education.
To begin
with,the presence of the current pandemic has escalated the need
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minimal personal contact,
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encouraging the need
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internet
connectivity
to allow people to maintain social distance.
In addition
, online classes enable tertiary institutions to have several classes at the same time despite
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distance
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distances

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.
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, online classes
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enable
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efficient communication between students and their lectures easily.
Thus
, virtual
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provide
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an efficient

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efficient
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and convince way of learning.
On the contrary
, online learning is expensive in terms of buying data bundles that will be necessary during communication.
However
, internet
connectivity
is
also
a challenge in some parts of the country making learning difficult.
Thus
, network
connectivity
is a major issue in making virtual learning successful. In summary, technological development has
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virtual learning to be relevant in the present generation; Despite challenges with internet
connectivity
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