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Some university now offer their courses on internet so that people can study online.Is it a positive or negative development?

#university #offer #courses #internet #people #study #development
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The current tertiary institutions offer virtual learning to their students to allow
continuation
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 of education.
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 with,the presence of the current pandemic has escalated the need
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 minimal personal contact,
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 encouraging the need
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 internet
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 to allow people to maintain social distance.
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, online classes enable tertiary institutions to have several classes at the same time despite
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distance
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.
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, online classes
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enable
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 efficient communication between students and their lectures easily.
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, virtual
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lessons
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 and convince way of learning.
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, online learning is expensive in terms of buying data bundles that will be necessary during communication.
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, internet
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 is
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 a challenge in some parts of the country making learning difficult.
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, network
connectivity
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 is a major issue in making virtual learning successful. In summary, technological development has
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 virtual learning to be relevant in the present generation; Despite challenges with internet
connectivity
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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