Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is no doubt that these days the scientific
research
is noteworthy for someone who needs it to prepare for numerous things as private meetings.So, we should take
this
information of scientific
research
from the designed
government
more constant than the private companies.In my
opinion
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the private companies are more restricted review by the
government
we should give them the freedom for complex reviews.
First
of all,the
government
scientific
research
reveals all the restrict information and discuss the new version of all variety of event.
For instance
,Marry Robbin
research
about the global flowers source trend in Altaif its trend to water or makeup
also
,hair mist.,
Moreover
the private companies as well art-class scientific
research
but the complex but the others fear rigid tell known time they just want the light green.
Secondly
, it's necessary to keep our focus on those guys who properly come for other countries to steal the
research
to increase their country revenue from our outstanding tired its shame for them.In fact,because of
this
,action the
government
is up-to-date on all
this
steeling.At the same time, they protect the privacy renowned scientific
research
for real is impact for a period of time to both of them.For example, in Hong Kong in 2000 they closed the historical library with rocks for two years to protect the books from volcanos and the earthquake. In conclusion, we should modesty both of them ,but we mustn't take the outdated reviews for just compliment the people for us.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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