Many believe that living in a city offers greater benefits compared to life in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The singular noun world follows a number other than one. Consider changing the noun to the plural form.
Your article usage with the geographic name University of Sto may be incorrect.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
The spelling of centers is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
It seems that system may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- in additional
- for example
- for instance
- even though
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