At the present time, the population of some countries include relative large numbers of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give the reasons for your answer and include any relative examples from your own knowledge or experiences.

In certain countries, it is true that teenagers become more populated than elders.
Although
there are various benefits to having much more younger
people
compared to the figure of
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population, some negative issues needed to be considered, which will
further
be discussed at both points in the following essay. On the one hand, there are numerous advantages of
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population being less than of young adults.
First
of all, teenagers are the strong power of
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to improve their country in better ways by using their adaptable and distinguish ideas with
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perspective
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that
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older
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could not apply. Learning to modern technologies is
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main problem to some elders who could not follow up-to-date trends about technology,
for example
, computers and AI. Apart from
this
, another
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is more creative thinking and having happier life from their own experience. Take a gap year is a good example which
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for exploring the world to have sufficient passions to come back and try to do something better in their life
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like other elders who
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strict in their rules and only think about works and promotion. Despite the positives to many younger
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, some negative aspects need to consider.
To begin
, young matures have more
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opportunities
to commit crimes,
for instance
, robbery and shoplifter.
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some follow bad behaviour from their role models, parents and friends. According to in Thailand, many criminals are mostly under 25 years old.
Secondly
, there are
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sender messages from older
people
, resulting in
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of traditional culture. Some ancient cultural traditions which stay in
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long time
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could
not survive in the present days without them
such
as memorable stories in
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holiday called Song Grant Day which show respect to their own relatives. In conclusion, even though there are numerous benefits to
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of young adults becoming higher than
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of older
people
, it
also
brings some demerits to
this
as well. The countries would be developed by far better compared with these days by some younger
people
with new creation while many older
people
fail to do it.
Therefore
, I believe that there are more beneficial than bad points.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographic trend
  • economic development
  • workforce dynamics
  • social innovation
  • healthcare allocation
  • education and skills development
  • employment challenges
  • economic instability
  • resource management
  • aging population
  • cultural and societal shifts
  • generational conflicts
  • global competitiveness
  • progressive changes
  • technological advancements
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