Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Advertising has played a big
role
in the recent past and many advancements have been made in marketing a product
. Some people
believe that advertising has played a significant role
in persuading us to buy things whereas others think that we are used to it and we do not pay attention to advertisements
anymore. In my opinion, advertising plays an important role
and is successful in convincing us to buy products
to a large extent and this
essay will discuss both points of view.
In recent times, mankind has been engrossed in television and other digital devices which have given companies
an opportunity to successfully market their products
. There are a number of adverts that run on the television while we watch a movie, a comedy show, or a live sports match and our attention is on the TV screen throughout the show,movie or match which allows companies
to market their products
digitally and if someone is looking to buy a new product
and watches the advertisement
then
it convince the customer to buy something they need. To cite an example, I wanted to buy a new phone
in 2018 and I was confused between the two brands. Fortunately, I saw an advertisement
for an Apple phone
running on the television while watching a cricket match and I was convinced to buy that particular phone
as I could not resist after looking at the details. Furthermore
, companies
are investing a lot of money on promotions and advertisements
and the content provided in the advertisements
is getting better day by day due to which companies
are highly successful in persuading people
to buy their products
.
On the other hand
, there is a limit to the attention span of mankind and some people
believe that we are so used to see advertisements
that we tend to ignore them completely. In this
situation, if a customer is not looking to buy a particular product
then
they will ignore the advert and people
are inclined towards putting the TV on mute on the advertisements
begin. Moreover
, sometimes an advertisement
pops up on our mobile phone
and we ignore that completely as it looks like a promotional message. For instance
, my father used to get a number of advertisements
on his phone
and he opted to use the "Do not disturb" service provided by the telecom company.
In a nutshell, advertisement
plays a significant role
in eradicating the thoughts of not buying a product
by creating luring adverts and on the other
hand
too much promotion can work against the company as Add a comma
,hand
people
start ignoring
. Correct pronoun usage
itignoring
Advertisement
strategies should be laid in a way where people
do not get irritated by multiple ads.Submitted by gagan.katalyst on
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