in some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

In

this

modern day

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, it is prevalent that people’s average weights are rising whereas their

health

and

fitness

levels are falling. Some reasons allegedly cause

this

phenomenon.

Therefore

, I think both the government and

society

should take part in a collaboration to tackle

this

problem

.

To begin

with, inhabitants around the world tend to consume more junk

food

instead

of healthy

food

.

For instance

, workers in a company who have less time for rest might choose some ready-served meals

such

as burgers or chips for their breakfast and lunch because the meals have a more

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taste and are simpler rather than salads.

As a result

, it may be enjoyable

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the moment but it can be harmful

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their

health

in the long run. Another

problem

which can reduce

health

level

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is the cost to get into

fitness

facilities

. Presently, everything in

society

is prone to commercial use which automatically impacts several areas of life.

Likewise

, people need to pay more in order to enter or become regular members of the gym.

As a result

, they may be more indolent to work out at the gym so that it would be difficult to increase their

health

level. To tackle

this

problem

, there are at least two things that can be taken into account.

Firstly

,

society

needs to be aware of the dire situation that can happen if they continue the bad lifestyle of consuming junk

food

.

Subsequently

, it can be done by giving

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socialization or education in the work offices or school about how to have a healthy life by avoiding junk

food

.

Secondly

, the governments should impose policies to reduce the cost to afford the

fitness

facilities

such

as determining a ceiling price for gym

facilities

or making public

facilities

which can help to improve people’s

fitness

level.

Hence

, it can lighten people’s burden about the cost and may urge them to do more exercises. In a nutshell, both the government and

society

have a vital role to overcome

this

health

and

fitness

problem

across the countries. As mentioned above, they need to be more aware of their own position and condition so that they can make a good collaboration to increase

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of life.