in some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

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, it is prevalent that people’s average weights are rising whereas their

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and

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levels are falling. Some reasons allegedly cause

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phenomenon.

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, I think both the government and

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should take part in a collaboration to tackle

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problem

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.

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with, inhabitants around the world tend to consume more junk

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instead

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of healthy

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, workers in a company who have less time for rest might choose some ready-served meals

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as burgers or chips for their breakfast and lunch because the meals have a more

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taste and are simpler rather than salads.

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, it may be enjoyable

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the moment but it can be harmful

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their

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in the long run. Another

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which can reduce

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level

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is the cost to get into

fitness

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facilities

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. Presently, everything in

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is prone to commercial use which automatically impacts several areas of life.

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, people need to pay more in order to enter or become regular members of the gym.

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, they may be more indolent to work out at the gym so that it would be difficult to increase their

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level. To tackle

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problem

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, there are at least two things that can be taken into account.

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,

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needs to be aware of the dire situation that can happen if they continue the bad lifestyle of consuming junk

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, it can be done by giving

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socialization or education in the work offices or school about how to have a healthy life by avoiding junk

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, the governments should impose policies to reduce the cost to afford the

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facilities

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as determining a ceiling price for gym

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or making public

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which can help to improve people’s

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level.

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, it can lighten people’s burden about the cost and may urge them to do more exercises. In a nutshell, both the government and

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have a vital role to overcome

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health

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and

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problem

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across the countries. As mentioned above, they need to be more aware of their own position and condition so that they can make a good collaboration to increase

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of life.