Rich countries should allow jobs for skilled and knowledgeable employees who are from poor countries. Do you agree or disagree?

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for discussion, the poor from various
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should be accepted to
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by the wealthy
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. As a matter of fact, in
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day and ,age there is most without employment and poor
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in different areas. I am of the opinion that developing
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mustn't be forced to admit other
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'
people
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to
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.
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of all, both international and national declarations have been shown that each country ought to establish positive and large chances
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their nation,
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nevertheless
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also
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they are able to accept in overseas
people
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. Recently, in fact, more employment, business others can't tolerate
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conditions so the
government
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makes an effort to supply their
people
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with jobs. What is more, if local
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support they will admire their
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and will support them, a local human will commence
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better than the foreign, the quantity of the without jobs will drop to almost minimum. Briefly, I believe that the
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has got a basic obligation, to equip folk.
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, local
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have accustomed to various demands
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already they know living conditions, outlays,income, the rules of the legislation and so on. As well, they have got certain opportunities, the resource and so on. I consider that folk have got high
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experience than an overseas human. I have read that from blogs and
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social media, some verdicts have been confirmed by the
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that they will not accept a foreign person. Taking into consideration, every
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has got a debt or a duty, to enforce
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plans or measures for their
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. Any
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haven't got so obligation
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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