Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is undeniably true that more and more
people
are immigrating to a country for their better life or their dream. However
, from my perspective, this
situation can't necessarily cause severe problems to the native people
there. Rather, there would be some advantages from it.
On one hand, it is understandable that there are some people
who are worried about their newcoming based on their low proficiency in the language
. This
is because there is a likelihood that their language
skills could cause misunderstandings and conflicts during their conversation. For example
, a fight could happen once a foreigner understood what a native speaker said to him or her as an insulting meaning even though it was not. If this
trend keeps occurring, there would be huge
inconvenience to the public.
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On the other hand
, still, there are several benefits of being in a foreign country as a non-native speaker. Firstly
, in case we are not confident of the new language
, it is natural to be careful before we say something not to make any misunderstandings. This
means we can prevent any unpleasant occasions. If we are good at the language
, still the situation would be better. For example
, considering there are a lot of interracial couples who fight less often than the couples who use the same language
, it is noticeable that understanding and respecting each other outweigh the proficiency itself when we live a
life.
In conclusion, even though it is true somehow that there are some difficulties if Remove the article
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people
live in a different country whose national language
is not the same as theirs, still, there are benefits. Therefore
, before finalizing immediately about this
idea, all things should be considered reasonable.Submitted by ggg on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite