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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e books rather than paper books. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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In recent years more and more people are choosing to read
ebooks
 rather than
paper
books
. I am of the opine that
ebooks
has
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 more benefits than drawbacks which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. The
first
 and foremost merit of
ebooks
 in
this
 tech-savvy era is the wider accessibility to
the
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modern readers.The
ebooks
 are readily available in a lot of subjects like Biology, History, Chemistry, Business Organisation, Computers at numerous platforms
such
 as online and offline applications, browsers which are available to an individual at its fingertips at a desired location and
time
.
In addition
 to
this
,
e
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books
 result in
time
 savage as a
person
 is bothered
from
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cumbersome
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 process of finding a
paper
book
.
This
 has resulted in
time
 and effort
saving
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. A recent study conducted by an eminent educationist Jean William in Oxford University, it was revealed that that in developed
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 like
United
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 States, Japan there are fewer libraries from
past
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 10 years and children tend to read
ebooks
 more by 70% than of
paper
books
. Another clear merit is, in
this
 modernised
time
 the availability of
ebooks
 has increased manifold.The trending
time
 of
ebooks
 offers an advantages part that content or the
book
 cannot be lost as they are available everywhere online.
E
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books
 once deleted can be easily recovered but
that is
 not in the case of
paper
books
 if a
person
 has lost the
book
.
Furthermore
,
ebooks
 can be easily shared
to
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 any
person
 irrespective of geographical
constraint
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constraints
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. An individual can easily share any
book
to
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 anyone all over the world which is not available in the case of
paper
books
.
Although
 there are disadvantages of reading
e
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books
 that it has increased screen
time
 of a
person
, the advantages like greater accessibility, transferable, easily
reliable
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 are far more in comparison.
E
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books
has
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 played an
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 role in
this
 digital era.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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