It is important that children with a wide range of abilities and from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is important for all the
people
in this
world to accept people
of other countries and cultures. And I think that this
acceptance should be taught to children
from a young age.Some people
are of the opinion that children
with various abilities and social backgrounds should study together at the same school. In my opinion, this
is a very good idea and it can be very beneficial for the children
.The following paragraphs will discuss both views in detail and will also
justify my opinion.
Children
must learn that the world is like a family and everyone is an important part of it. By allowing children
belonging to different social backgrounds to mix with each other will help to develop an open mindset in them . They will learn to be more tolerant and accepting to
Change preposition
of
people
who have a different belief system and traditional value
than them and Fix the agreement mistake
values
this
can really useful
for their future life. Add a missing verb
be useful
For instance
, my brother completed his education in an international which had Add an article
a student
student
from all over the world. And because of Fix the agreement mistake
students
this
he has grown Add a comma
,this
to
a very patient and understanding adult.
Everyone has a different level of intelligence and skill set and Change preposition
into
this
is true in case
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the case
children
also
. I strongly believe that children
should never be compared to each because
of it.Studying in a school with Correct pronoun usage
other because
people
having different talents helps children
understand that no one is good at everything but there is always something that a person is better at as compared to others.This
teaches children
to respect other's abilities even if they are different than
themselves and Change the preposition
from
also
if it is an ability not common in the
society. He/she should not be treated differently because of Correct article usage
apply
this
.For instance
, there could a student
who is a very good painter but he/she could be extremely bad at studies and does not get good grades. Such
a student
should never be looked down upon because even though he/she can't study well, the student
can go on to become a great artist.
To conclude , sending children
to schools with people
from a range of different social backgrounds and various talents can teach them a lot of important life lessons.It will help to
become an Correct pronoun usage
me to
open minded
adult who respects Add a hyphen
open-minded
people
with different skills.Submitted by yashashrikolalle on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite