It is important that children with a wide range of abilities and from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is important for all the
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in
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world to accept
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of other countries and cultures. And I think that
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acceptance should be taught to
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from a young age.Some
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are of the opinion that
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with various abilities and social backgrounds should study together at the same school. In my opinion,
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is a very good idea and it can be very beneficial for the
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.The following paragraphs will discuss both views in detail and will
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justify my opinion.
Children
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must learn that the world is like a family and everyone is an important part of it. By allowing
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belonging to different social backgrounds to mix with each other will help to develop an open mindset in them . They will learn to be more tolerant and accepting
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who have a different belief system and traditional
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than them and
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can really
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for their future life.
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, my brother completed his education in an international which had
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a student
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from all over the world. And because of
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he has grown
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a very patient and understanding adult. Everyone has a different level of intelligence and skill set and
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is true in
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of
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also
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. I strongly believe that
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should never be compared to each
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of it.Studying in a school with
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having different talents helps
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understand that no one is good at everything but there is always something that a person is better at as compared to others.
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teaches
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to respect other's abilities even if they are different
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themselves and
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if it is an ability not common in
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society. He/she should not be treated differently because of
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.
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, there could a
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who is a very good painter but he/she could be extremely bad at studies and does not get good grades.
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a
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should never be looked down upon because even though he/she can't study well, the
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can go on to become a great artist. To conclude , sending
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to schools with
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from a range of different social backgrounds and various talents can teach them a lot of important life lessons.It will help
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become an
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adult who respects
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with different skills.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Promotes Inclusivity
  • Fosters Equality
  • Appreciate Diversity
  • Equitable Society
  • Broad Perspective
  • Problem-solving Skills
  • Real-World Diversity
  • Navigate
  • Global Society
  • Strive for Improvement
  • Unique Talents
  • Healthy Competitive Spirit
  • Reduce Social Inequality
  • Access to Resources
  • Empathy
  • Social Skills
  • Communication
  • Teamwork
  • Conflict Resolution
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