You recently stayed at a hotel for a conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. Include Where you stayed What the problems were How they can fix your complaints

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to complain about the
room
services at your hotel, Bayswater Inn International, from November 16th to November 17th, 2018. The staff in your hotel were exceptionally welcoming, and the location was quite convenient.
However
, I was disappointed with the
room
and spent two miserable nights there.
Last
month, I booked a deluxe
room
at your hotel on the fourth floor. I stayed in
room
403 for two days with my company officials for two days’ conference organized by Severo International in Gurugram, Haryana. I made a booking with a booking ID MN0078 through an online website MakeMyTrip, after going with your reviews. I found many problems in the
room
,
such
as the electronic appliances like the water heater and kettle were not functioning appropriately. Due to
this
, I had to take a cold water bath
that is
tough in the winter season. Adding to
this
, when I called on your provided
room
service helpline, no one responded to any of my calls. These sets of problems gave me a miserable experience at your place. For a valuable stay, I would like to recommend some improvements that may help you increase customer satisfaction level.
Firstly
, you need to improve your housekeeping facility and make it super active in resolving issues.
Also
, make a repair check on all the electronic equipment in the
room
before you make any
further
booking. I hope you will work on my given advice. Yours faithfully, Arshpreet Kaur
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  • I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with...
  • ...which I encountered during my recent stay at...
  • The first issue was...
  • Additionally, I found that...
  • Moreover, the... was not up to standard.
  • I suggest that...
  • This experience has left me...
  • I hope you will address these concerns promptly by...
  • To improve your service, you could...
  • As a form of compensation, I would appreciate...
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