Due to low- cost airlines, many more people can travel abroad than ever before. do the advantages that tourists bring to the countries they visit outweigh the disadvantages?
In the past, travel abroad was a difficult thing, only certainty
people
did this
journey. Nowadays, more and more people
are travelling overseas due to
the affordability of airlines. Despite the fact that the presence of tourists
can contribute to a detrimental effect on local tourism
, I believe that many visitors
from other countries
can promote better economic sectors.
Those who focus on the drawbacks of tourism
tend to worry about the damage of numerous tourist
destinations created by visitors
. For example
, coral reefs in many countries
, such
as Australia and Vietnam, are often damaged by tourists
during their scuba diving or snorkelling. This
will impact the life of many magnificent creatures under the sea which rely on the growth of coral reefs. Furthermore
, ancient historical treasures such
as the stupa in Borobudur temple, are being worn down by tourists
. Hence
, the more visitors
visit tourist
destinations, the more destruction will be gained by the countries
.
However
, I would argue that there are powerful benefits to a country having a strong tourism
industry and that not only do these benefits outweigh the disadvantages but also
, the aforementioned problems are relatively easy to solve. Firstly
tourists
provide jobs for local people
. As millions of visitors
flood into tourist
attractions, locals are employed in droves by restaurants, hotels and retail services, and transport and security companies. Opportunities are also
created for locals to set up their own small businesses. Moreover
, locals can be employed as tour guides to manage and educate the tourists
to prevent them from causing damage. The more tourists
that come, the more jobs that can be created. Secondly
, tourism
can have a huge impact on a country’s economy in general. Tourists
spend a lot of money on travel, accommodation, food, entertainment and so on. Many countries
in this
world rely on tourism
to boost their economies in this
manner.
In conclusion, while
it is indisputable that the existence of tourists
can cause a lot of damage in many local tourist
destinations, I believe that because of creates jobs for local people
and boosts the country’s economy, the advantages of tourism
outweigh the disadvantages.Submitted by musa.nuwa on
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