Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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commuters’

percentage

and

this

includes train,

car

, tube or

bus

in London in 1960, 1980 and 2000 year. The

car

experienced dramatically

increasing

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during

this

40 year period. In 1960, the

percentage

of

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the car

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car

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cars

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was around 7%. The number of people taking private cars increased to 23% and it continued to increase until 2000 and eventually stopped at roughly 37%. While the

percentage

of

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kept decreasing. The data of

bus

commuters was almost 34% in 1960 but it fell to 26% and 15% in 1980 and 2000, respectively. Comparing with

car

and

bus

, both train and tube remained stable. Train’s

percentage

was almost 20% in 1960 and it increased to 27% in 1980

then

dropped to 22% in 2000.

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, the number of people who take

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tubes

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remained steady. There was 27% in 1960, after that the

percentage

reached the bottom at 22% in 1980.

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it climbed to 25% in 2000. Tubes and buses were the most popular transports in 1960. After that,

train

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the train

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became the

first

one. In 2000, cars became the

first

commuter choice