University should accept equal number of male and female students in every university. To what extend do you agree or disagree??
It has been
a
debatable for Change the article
apply
long
time whether should have equal chances to access Change the article
a long
both
genders
in every university
or not. In my opinion, I strongly agree that both
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
should get Fix the agreement mistake
females
same
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the same
opportunity
since all are human beings.
To begin
with, the reason why accepting equal numbers for both
genders
is that females are searching jobs
after they have married to support their family. Change preposition
for jobs
In other words
, they should educate or should be degree
holders in order to get a job. For example
, some employers offer with
a lot of requirements to join their organization in some companies and Change preposition
apply
female
should get at least a Fix the agreement mistake
females
degree
to meet the requirements. Therefore
, if Add an article
the university
university
will limit the number of students according to gender, it will surely lack Fix the agreement mistake
universities
of
chances for females to be Remove the preposition
apply
a
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apply
degree
holder
and it is unfair Fix the agreement mistake
holders
as
for human beings.
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apply
Moreover
, Females are worth to get
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getting
equal
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the equal
opportunity
since both
girls and boys are human
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a human
being
and they should have human rights equally. Change the noun form
beings
For example
, if some girls who really enthuse
to get a Change the form of the verb
enthused
degree
and to become a technician will not get the offer from University
by restricting the number of female students, it will make them to
become unconfident to stay their whole lives and they have to face with the unacceptable problems because of lacking equal Change the verb form
apply
opportunity
among the genders
. Therefore
, government
should consider Add an article
the government
for
Change preposition
apply
this
condition and must plan to give the chances equally to access in every university
without limiting the number of students.
To conclude, I completely assert with this
statement that although
there is Correct article usage
a different
different
between girls and boys in Replace the word
difference
genders
, both
are worth to get same equal opportunity
according to the
human rights.Correct article usage
apply
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