University should accept equal number of male and female students in every university. To what extend do you agree or disagree??

It has been
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debatable for
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time whether should have equal chances to access
both
genders
in every
university
or not. In my opinion, I strongly agree that
both
male
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and
female
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females
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should get
same
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opportunity
since all are human beings.
To begin
with, the reason why accepting equal numbers for
both
genders
is that females are searching
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after they have married to support their family.
In other words
, they should educate or should be
degree
holders in order to get a job.
For example
, some employers offer
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a lot of requirements to join their organization in some companies and
female
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should get at least a
degree
to meet the requirements.
Therefore
, if
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university
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will limit the number of students according to gender, it will surely lack
of
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chances for females to be
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degree
holder
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and it is unfair
as
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for human beings.
Moreover
, Females are worth
to get
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equal
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opportunity
since
both
girls and boys are
human
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being
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and they should have human rights equally.
For example
, if some girls who really
enthuse
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to get a
degree
and to become a technician will not get the offer from
University
by restricting the number of female students, it will make them
to
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become unconfident to stay their whole lives and they have to face with the unacceptable problems because of lacking equal
opportunity
among the
genders
.
Therefore
,
government
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should consider
for
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this
condition and must plan to give the chances equally to access in every
university
without limiting the number of students. To conclude, I completely assert with
this
statement that
although
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between girls and boys in
genders
,
both
are worth to get same equal
opportunity
according to
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human rights.
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