In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree ?
The impact of Covid19 is showing drastic changes in the tourism sector.
Although
, people are showing keen interest to go on liesure
trips Correct your spelling
leisure
but
they want to Remove the conjunction
apply
take-up
short tours to nearby locations. Correct your spelling
take up
This
essay,
will highlight the upcoming trend of domestic Remove the comma
apply
travel
getting more preference over international travel
by the resident of our country
.
Even though,
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pandemic
has Add an article
the pandemic
a pandemic
restricted
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a restricted
commute
of daily travelling to work in Correct article usage
the commute
the
society, it has still not Correct article usage
apply
dampen
the spirit of folks Change the verb form
dampened
togo
on holidays with their friends and families. Because of Correct your spelling
to go
this
people are ready to go to locations outside city
limit or places not visited by others. Correct article usage
the city
This
is happening, firstly
, due to increase
in work from home Correct article usage
an increase
scenario
wherein individuals are constantly in search of weekend gateways like homestays or private villas to enjoy moments of relaxation and rejuvenate with loved ones. Fix the agreement mistake
scenarios
In addition
to it, as work pressure is increasing tremondously
with intense competition people are unable to get leaves for Correct your spelling
tremendously
longer
duration of Add an article
a longer
tow
to three weeks, Add an article
a tow
the tow
this
has been one major cause of more frequent short trips in and around their location.
On the other hand
, travelling Correct your spelling
abroad
aborad
hasn't been completely stopped but started showing signs of decline as per ITA report where outbound traffic from India reduced by 34% compared to Correct your spelling
abroad
increase
of 62% in inbound Correct article usage
an increase
travel
within country
. Add an article
the country
This
is, primarily due to, plethora
of restrictions that comes with abroad Add an article
a plethora
the plethora
travel
plus mandatory medical test
and quarantine in Fix the agreement mistake
tests
majority
of places. AnotherAdd an article
the majority
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,
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key
factor is the cost of visiting another Add an article
the key
a key
country
has risen Add a hyphen
two-fold
two fold
which is unaffordable for Correct your spelling
twofold
majority
of travellers.
To summarize, I agree with the opine that inland tours would gain more prominence over international trips since they are more Add an article
the majority
budget friendly
and Add a hyphen
budget-friendly
majority
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the majority
a majority
country
places are not explored by the citizens.Submitted by hdfctesting20 on
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