In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree ?

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The impact of Covid19 is showing drastic changes in the tourism sector.
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, people are showing keen interest to go on
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leisure
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they want to
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short tours to nearby locations.
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will highlight the upcoming trend of domestic
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getting more preference over international
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by the resident of our
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. Even though
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pandemic
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has
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of daily travelling to work in
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society, it has still not
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the spirit of folks
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to go
on holidays with their friends and families. Because of
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people are ready to go to locations outside
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limit or places not visited by others.
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is happening,
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, due to
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in work from home
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wherein individuals are constantly in search of weekend gateways like homestays or private villas to enjoy moments of relaxation and rejuvenate with loved ones.
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to it, as work pressure is increasing
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with intense competition people are unable to get leaves for
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to three weeks,
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has been one major cause of more frequent short trips in and around their location.
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hasn't been completely stopped but started showing signs of decline as per ITA report where outbound traffic from India reduced by 34% compared to
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of 62% in inbound
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within
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.
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is, primarily due to,
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of restrictions that comes with abroad
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plus mandatory medical
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and quarantine in
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of places. Another
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factor is the cost of visiting another
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which is unaffordable for
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of travellers. To summarize, I agree with the opine that inland tours would gain more prominence over international trips since they are more
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and
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of these home
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places are not explored by the citizens.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • domestic tourism
  • international travel
  • cultural exchange
  • national pride
  • affordability
  • convenience
  • ecotourism
  • heritage sites
  • local businesses
  • comfort zone
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