IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 6.5

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large company can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#individuals #environment #governments #company #difference
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about environmental preservation.
However
Linking Words
, whether only the authority and big firms can make a significant contribution to the improvement of the environment is a controversial issue. My view is that a single national could
also
Linking Words
 make a huge difference.
First
Linking Words
, it is obvious that single inhabitant's behaviours have been associated with environmental conservation. We are producing a lot of waste at every moment. If we throw them at random, the whole city will be filled with garbage . An environmentally friendly situation is constructed by every settler.
Moreover
Linking Words
, without the cooperation of the public, the environmental policy from social institutions can't be implemented. Chinese cities have pushed for garbage classification for years and it has never really got off the ground, while Japan has made a huge success in garbage sorting. The most important reason is that the general quality of residents in Japan is better than in China. The policy needs every citizen's appreciation and support to bring good results.
Although
Linking Words
 public behaviours are important for environmental protection, the government and big firms could guide them in the right way. It means that government can make related rules and companies utilize their resources for teaching people how to improve the environment correctly. No single firm or government could handle the environmental trouble. In sum, individuals
also
Linking Words
 play a vital role in environmental improvement. Environment protection is a cooperative and long-term project, not only a single person but
also
Linking Words
 social institutions could make an impact on it.
Submitted by liuhuixia0816 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: