Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is undeniable that the world has had changed importantly from the natural community into urban society. Some
people
believe that we have a lot of
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choices
for
decision
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to do something nowadays. From my point of view, I disagree with
this
viewpoint for many reasons, outlined in the detail in the following paragraph. Some
people
disagree with
this
idea because many
people
at present are coming more knowledge from the high education rather than persons in the past, as the result, they can create a lot of innovations and technologies which have a dramatic advantage to
everyone
.
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, engineers use their knowledge to create different cars to respond
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use of humans in society.
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demand of
people
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as they design and construct different accommodations to respond
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lives of each, and they create many
choices
of career to respond
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needs of humans in the community.
Additionally
, persons think that having many
choices
is the merit to
everyone
because the world has changed from the past, as the result, they want many
choices
which are the better for adapting in the civilization.
For instance
, ancient
people
often consumed
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real foods to get real
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, while
people
at present create
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instant food
such
as food capsules which have the nutrients same
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real food for ease of
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. Another good example, human in the past often used leaf and wool to make the garment, but nowadays
people
have many
choices
of clothes making
that is
creating with both the handmade and machine. Those clothes were created to respond
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changing lifestyles of
everyone
at the present. In conclusion, I strongly disagree with
this
viewpoint because having a lot of
choices
can offer many advantages to
everyone
in
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society. They can choose the better choice from many
choices
for a good life of them.
Although
I disagree whit
this
idea, having too many
choices
can lead to the competition community because
everyone
in the public wants the better choice
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themselves.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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