Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is undeniable that the world has had changed importantly from the natural community into urban society. Some

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believe that we have a lot of

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choices

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to do something nowadays. From my point of view, I disagree with

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viewpoint for many reasons, outlined in the detail in the following paragraph. Some

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disagree with

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idea because many

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at present are coming more knowledge from the high education rather than persons in the past, as the result, they can create a lot of innovations and technologies which have a dramatic advantage to

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, engineers use their knowledge to create different cars to respond

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use of humans in society.

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, they make something to respond

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demand of

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as they design and construct different accommodations to respond

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difference

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lives of each, and they create many

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of career to respond

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needs of humans in the community.

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, persons think that having many

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is the merit to

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because the world has changed from the past, as the result, they want many

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which are the better for adapting in the civilization.

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, ancient

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often consumed

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real foods to get real

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, while

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at present create

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instant food

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as food capsules which have the nutrients same

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real food for ease of

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. Another good example, human in the past often used leaf and wool to make the garment, but nowadays

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have many

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of clothes making

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creating with both the handmade and machine. Those clothes were created to respond

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changing lifestyles of

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at the present. In conclusion, I strongly disagree with

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viewpoint because having a lot of

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can offer many advantages to

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in

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society. They can choose the better choice from many

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for a good life of them.

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I disagree whit

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idea, having too many

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can lead to the competition community because

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in the public wants the better choice

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themselves.