Even more people are interested in wearing fashionable clothes nowadays. Do you think it is a positive or a negative trend?

In the 21st century, there are more and more new
trends
in clothing, including clothing that would only wear branded
clothes
. I believe,that everybody decides what to wear .      There are
people
,who prefer wearing only branded
clothes
,
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because only
such
things have good quality.
Also
,branded
clothes
are very comfortable and fit almost everyone. Branded
clothes
show that a man is rich and can afford them.Often,
trends
are the opinion imposed by society that a person should dress
this
way.     The biggest disadvantage is inaccessibility. Only a few
people
can afford branded
clothes
,
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because they are really dear.
However
,there is a lot of shops were being branded clothe lower in price,but lower in quality. Probably, due to
this
shops appeared to trend to wear branded
clothes
. Unfortunately, all of the branded
clothes
are similar to each other and everyone is like grey mice, who stupidly follow
trends
. There are
people
,who ,unlike branded
clothes
, but still buy them because it is a trend and he probably looks good in
this
. In fact ,he will hate himself due to
clothes
not fit him and the person wants to wear what he wants.      In conclusion, I think ,that
people
must wear what they want,despite the
trends
,because the way how a person dresses is
also
a way of themselves
expressing
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  • confidence
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  • waste
  • fast fashion
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