Technological developments leads to lots of environmental issues. Some people think a simple life style can preserve the environment. While others argue technology itself can solve it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is often argued that play
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advancement in technologies , directly or indirectly creates Remove the comma
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threat
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a threat
for
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to
environment
.A group of people suggest that transformation in Add an article
the environment
living
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the living
a living
standard
can mitigate Fix the agreement mistake
standards
this
problem.While other
believes that Correct pronoun usage
others
eco -friendly
technology can help to fix Correct your spelling
eco-friendly
this
issues.Correct determiner usage
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essay will discuss both perspectives.
On the one hand,those who think that lifestyle
of human Correct article usage
the lifestyle
being
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beings
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imperative
role in environmental protection.Each Add an article
an imperative
individuals
has Change to a singular noun
individual
tend
to less use of technological appliances in homes or in offices and tries to do work physically Change the verb form
tended
may
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maybe
be prevent
the ambience from Change the verb form
prevent
worsen
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worsening
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the
habits in Change preposition
in the
lifestyle
may make environment
evergreen .Correct article usage
the environment
Besides
this
, nowadays,people using owned private vehicles to commute their
workplace , which creates carbon emissions in Change preposition
to their
environment
,in order to get rid Add an article
the environment
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a bicycle
the bicycle
bicycle
can be effective measures,which would Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
helps
to finish the nearby work Change the verb form
help
such
as shopping and going to colleges .As a result
, Bicycle will definitely affects
the situation in Change the verb form
affect
positive
way.
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a positive
On the other hand
,the opponent of this
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viewpoint
view point
believes that environmental friendly advancement in technology can bring significant changes Correct your spelling
viewpoint
such
as renewable energy sources (solar system) which provides 24*7 hours electricity unconditionly
. Correct your spelling
unconditionally
Hence
,environmental polluton
can be reduced to some extent.Correct your spelling
pollution
Secondly
, the government should make strict legislation against on
the usage of plastic bags and persuade the citizens to use Change preposition
apply
the
jute bags which is Correct article usage
apply
eco- friendly
in nature and would help to make Correct your spelling
eco-friendly
environment
fresh.
To conclude, Add an article
the environment
lifestyle
and advancement in machines can protect the environment
safer.It makes duty
of both individuals and regimes to take initiative towards Add an article
the duty
the
environmental protection.By changing simple Correct article usage
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lifestyle
habits andCorrect your spelling
eco-friendly
eco- friendly
electronic gadgets can reduce the negative impacts on ambience.Correct your spelling
eco-friendly
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