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Nowadays many students live with their families while others go to another city to study at university. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of both scenarios. Include relevant examples in your answer.

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With changes in the attitudes of students over years, there has been a discussion whether they need to stay with their
parents
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 or move to another city to pursue education. There are advantages and disadvantages of both scenarios. On one hand, some students decide to stay with their
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 as
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 has benefits. When people live with their
parents
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, they don't have to worry about certain things like financials, living in a hygienic environment, getting proper food and etc.
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, a
student
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 is living with his
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 he can get all his chores done on time and he can focus completely on his studies.
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, the
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 need not worry about doing any part-time job to earn enough for his living expenses.
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, there are certain advantages of living alone in a different city. Students will learn responsibility if they start living on their own.
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, if a
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 is living alone, he will understand the value of money as he needs to manage his financials on his own.
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, they will learn to do their chores on their own, which helps them in future when they have their own family. In conclusion, there are advantages and disadvantages of both scenarios. But it is always a
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's perspective whether to live alone or live with their
parents
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Emotional support
  • Independence
  • Self-reliance
  • Familiar environment
  • Social experiences
  • Responsibility
  • Personal growth
  • Homesickness
  • Financial strain
  • Diverse cultures
  • Networking opportunities
  • Family expectations
  • New identity
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