some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
An argumentation says that
music
can gather people
from various cultures and ages incredibly. I definitely agree with this
statement because of the main reasons: music
is a universal language
that everyone can understand, and it can unite people
from worldwide to do something together like singing, dancing, or play an instrument.
Music
is a universal language
in which people
can understand the meaning of music
even though they do not understand the language
which is used in the music
. The melody from music
can describe the feel, whether it is sad or happy music
. It can influence people
who hear it and gather them together to sing or humming on this
music
or song. Music
can unite people
worldwide without considering the ages, cultures, or any differences they have. They tend to gather, play instruments, and sing together in an event or at night while they want to relax. For instance
, several videos about student unity in the media sing a song in a different language
with the same melody and play different musical instruments. Besides
, social media, like TikTok and Instagram, show a family on the campsite singing and dancing together in three generations, from the grandmother until grandchild. It proves that this
universal language
can bring us together without looking at our background at all.
In conclusion, music
can bring us together whatever our background is, and it has been proven that music
can make our life closer to each other around the world and across the generations.Submitted by kardina.nawassa.s on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite