Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagrees with them.

Apart from family,
friends
play
crucial
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role in our lives. While some
people
believe that we should be
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friends
with only those
people
who have
same
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opinion as them
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whereas
, others
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it is beneficial to have
friends
with different perspectives.
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will discuss both sides of the discussion. Having
friends
who share
similar
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mindset
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as us is an advantage in
this
modern era. It is quite important to choose
people
who share the same opinions in order to continue relationships longer.
For example
, if an individual who believes in animal rights is
friends
with someone who is against it, could result
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hurting their emotions
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towards
the cause. Other than that, having
similar
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vision about any given condition
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helps in dealing with situation effectively and reduce chances of heated arguments.
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,
people
who
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in healthy eating will always support each other and won't put them in a situation where other
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feel cornered.
On the other hand
, some masses agree on having companions with different opinions than us. It certainly has its own advantages and disadvantages.
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a difference
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difference
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of opinion could help
people
to get out of their comfort zone and try things they have never tried before, like scuba diving.
This
helps in not only overcoming their fear but
also
gives them exposure to another side of the world other than their thoughts.
Consequently
, having
friends
with opposite thinking could result
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addiction
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to some deadly habits
such
as
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alcohol
or drugs addiction. In conclusion, it is quite essential to choose
people
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as
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our
friends
who adds value to our life. It's not mandatory to have
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perspective about any given situation as long as it helps us add value to our life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • harmonious
  • stress-free
  • disagreements
  • conflicts
  • reinforce
  • validate
  • comforting
  • reassuring
  • broaden your understanding
  • perspectives
  • challenge intellectually
  • think critically
  • personal growth
  • development
  • healthy debates
  • communication skills
  • mutual respect
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