Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.

It has been suggested that topic for discussion, more

people

believe that

rivarly

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rivalry

of feeling in the young can be given be courage,

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the

others

to argue that co-operate is necessary so it should be taught to children and

this

process will create more chances than a sense of competition. I believe strongly, the

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rivalry

of feeling is not better than the

cooperation

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of all, take a look at the

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, many

people

claim that there are some advantages. One of them, essential situations can be found out by

people

easier because if a person

overlook

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,

others

discover it.

For instance

, without the sin had better proved by a lawyer, probably he or she

forget

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to watch out

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maybe

others

can remember(remind). Another pattern, in

this

day and age there are some disasters in the world and doctors can reveal cures with

cooperation

easier than the

others

.

In addition

, your rivals will become fewer than before time and Another you can get support, ideas, comments from your dudes. I am of the opinion that

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condition is to understand each other and to esteem or respect. In fact,

people

unable

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struggle

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permanently. Briefly, the

cooperation

can give more chances, relevant, comfort and so on,

in

addition

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it is more profitable.

On the other hand

, as a matter of

fact

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some

people

always prefer to compete, I believe that there are some reasons

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instance,

people

don't admire sharing successes, lucks or they always become alone in life and they have accustomed

this

process. What is more, some

people

can betray if a person

work

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alone, probably he or she can prevent

this

process

parrtly

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partly

. In my opinion, every

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is to

respected

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by every person. Weighing up both sides of the argument, there are more positive sides in the

cooperation

than

rivarly

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rivalry

of the feeling. What is more, I have read that from various books and blogs

cooperation

is crucial for the future.