Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

Nowadays we all acknowledge that environmental
issue
might be the most important
issue
in our lives. Some
people
believed that the
extinction
of particular
species
of
floras
and
faunas
remain the main
problem
of
this
issue
.
On the other hand
, others argued that there would be more important environmental
problem
that have to be considered for these days. In
this
essay, I will elaborate both these view and conclude it with my opinion. There are various of information that we got from the news, especially about the
extinction
of particular
species
of
floras
and
faunas
. We heard that illegal logging has a tremendous effect on
this
extinction
.
In addition
, ‘Seaspiracy’, a film produced by Netflix, gave us an obvious perspective on how our fishing method could affect the
extinction
of several
species
of
floras
and
faunas
in ocean.
Thus
, some
people
believe that
this
extinction
would be a severe
problem
in our societies.
Nevertheless
, some
people
who have an expertise of environmental subject said that there would be a main
problem
behind these phenomena:
climate
change. Have been investing a massive number of money, Bill
Gates
and his wife Melinda
Gates
did a lot of research about
this
issue
. They said
climate
change could be a most severe
problem
in these days and for our future. There are various of impacts could be happened: perilous heatwave, crisis of foods, drought and flood (simultaneously happened) in different area, and definitely the
extinction
of particular
species
of
floras
and
faunas
.
Therefore
,
Gates
and Melinda Foundation had some serious speeches for years encouraging
people
to aware of
this
issue
. Once wrote a book specifically about
this
topic titled ‘How to Avoid a
Climate
Disaster’, Bill
Gates
said that there will be a more extreme jeopardy if we only do a business as usual; we have to prepare for it and do some mitigation. To conclude, I believe that we should take some actions to avoid (or at least lessen) the terrible impacts of the
climate
change. It might be initiated by the smallest social unit: a family.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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