You are going on holiday for one week and your neighbour has agreed to take care of your house while you are away. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter explain what you would like your neighbour to do while you are away tell him / her how to contact you if there is an emergency offer to buy your neighbour a gift to say thank you

Dear Mr. John, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am very grateful that you agreed to look after my home,
while
I am enjoying vacation with my family. I’ll be more than happy if you could perform
few
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additional tasks.
Firstly
, please take care of the vegetation in the backyard. The flowers require water only once a day in
morning
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.
Secondly
, before going to bed, kindly make sure the main door is locked.
Shall
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you require any assistance during the time you have my phone number, feel free to contact me anytime. Please don’t mind if left your call unattended as I’ll be having some quality time with my family. In case of emergency please try to contact me and my wife, I am
also
mentioning the hotel number I’m staying
i.e
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, 777-888-777. I am unable to express my gratitude
to
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your precious help in words.
Hence
I’ve decided to buy you
an
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gift. I am not sure what you like the most, but I’m planning to offer you a new
swiss
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watch as a gift. See you soon, and again thank you. Yours sincerely, Sameer Rana.
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Consider using a more detailed description or providing specific instructions for emergency scenarios, to enhance clarity and completeness.
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Including a brief thanks or personal note at the beginning can add warmth and personal touch to your letter.
Coherence and Cohesion
Using transitional phrases can enhance the flow between paragraphs and improve the overall coherence.
Task Achievement
The letter effectively provides instructions, contact information, and expresses gratitude.
Task Achievement
The closing and greeting are appropriately formal and polite, contributing to a suitable writing tone.
Coherence and Cohesion
Paragraphs are used effectively to separate different ideas, helping in maintaining a coherent structure.
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