Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.

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These days, advertising plays a big role in our market activities. Some people feel that it is usual and has no impact
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our preferences.
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, it might unconsciously
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our economic behaviour, and makes tremendous effects
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our purchases. In our societies, the majority of
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might enjoy
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interesting advertising that
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by some product brands. Their one-and-only objective is to gain
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bigger and wider markets and sales. There could be some methods to produce
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creative advertising: making some eye-catching billboards, employing some popular artists to endorse their products, or even producing some meaningful and memorable short movies. These ways might make the customers become more familiar with their brands, so they could feel undisturbedly comfortable with the advertising.
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people
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the game behind these activities. Having an enormous growth in a decade,
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sciences give a huge impact
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process. The management of the brand usually
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it to produce an accurate and
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policy. They usually invoked
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to gather and analyse big
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, which is well known as a big
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analysis. Do you realize that the layout of our pamphlets or buying catalogues
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structurally designed with a specific concept derived from
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customer-related analysis? Still, are you aware
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the advertising that interrupts you while you are browsing or watching online? How close is that
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your preferences? We all, unexpectedly, might not make any sense of it.
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, we are usually convinced
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their words; we unconsciously buy anything that we do not need it. In conclusion, it might be helpful for us to be aware of these phenomena, and to think twice whenever we
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buy anything. Digitalization of the era could bring us many changes, specifically
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our economic behaviour.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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