More and more qualified people are moving from poor countries to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine . some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people , rich countries are stealing from poor countries.others feel that this is the only part of the natural movement of workers around the world. discuss the both points of views.

Nowadays, well-qualified
people
are moving to developed
countries
and
work
in specialist areas
such
as
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engineering, computing and medicine. Some experts think that rich
countries
are stealing from the developing
countries
by encouraging the movement,
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however
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others believe
this
is the only
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way for workers to earn what they deserve. In
this
essay, we will discuss both points of view.
First
of all,
countries
will grow only if they have educated
people
, a good health care system, stable economic structure . ,
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they need scientists, engineers, doctors etc. because they are the pillar of any nation growth and if they all go to the affluent
countries
so poor nations never become wealthy
countries
,
For instance
, if developing
countries
lose their human resources it will wreak havoc to the nation.
As a result
, It will be devastating if these
people
should not stay in their country and not
work
for their own country.
On the other hand
, workers have the freedom to
work
around the world.
For example
, developing
countries
never give them what they deserve for their hard
work
and they don't have enough resources to use their skills and they have freedom where they want to leave their life. In
this
,world everyone wants better life so you get somewhere else it is worth it. In conclusion, It is important for to
people
think about yourselves. They should well pay for their hard
work
,
Although
they should think about country
first
if their developed they don't need to go anywhere and get what they want in their own nation.
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