Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The environment
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is now destroyed at an alarming rate, leading to various
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in our lives. Some people claim that the major environmental problem is the disappearance of some particular flora and fauna while others believe that there exist more significant
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. I personally think that the extinction of some
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is a serious problem but other environment-related issues should
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be paid careful attention
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The loss of some species can be considered
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main problem due to the deleterious effects it generates.
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of all, the extinction of some
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may cause ecological imbalance as it disrupts the
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chain and habitat.
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, some
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cannot feed themselves if their preys disappear and some
animals
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may struggle to live when the plants that are home to them die out. Gradually, other creatures will soon become extinct because of
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scarcity and habitat loss.
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, the medicine and
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industry may suffer from lacking materials. Extracts from particular
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or plants are essential in the production of some medicine and
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.
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, when an animal's existence comes to an end, scientists have to spend more time, money and even develop new systems to find other alternative sources.
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, people should
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be aware of other environmental
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caused by pollution. Different types of pollution are creating various health hazards.
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, emissions from vehicles and industrial plants lead to air pollution which may cause respiratory illnesses
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as asthmas, lungs cancer. Harmful chemicals from pesticides, fertilizers and untreated wastes discharged into rivers can cause skin-related diseases or even cancers when people use the contaminated water.
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, excessive use of chemicals in agriculture and improper farming contribute to soil degradation and the unhealthy
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grown on that land may damage our health gradually. In conclusion, environmental
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should be perceived from different angles and there is no issue
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is of greater importance than the others.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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