Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

For some people, the culture of the individuals has been influenced by the
country
where they lived, but others claim that
this
influence
is much short. The culture of the population can be defined through the types of food, clothes, level of education and sometimes the
country
can not only maximize but
also
minimize the importance of these items.
This
essay will discuss how a
country
can determine the culture of
someone
. On the one hand, if it is a fair and democratic
country
with many opportunities not only the education but
also
the job for the citizens and the quality health for the population, there are not questions that people will have proud of living there.
For example
, a
country
that invests in its population will have a society more active and determined to show and share with the world its origin and perception.
In other words
, the more people are stimulated and encouraged by a specific place, the more they will have proud of their origins.
Therefore
, a
country
can
influence
in some cases. But
on the other hand
, the baggage of knowledge of
someone
can be determined by a variety of factors,
such
as different kinds of music and the use of the internet which leads to change attitudes and behaviour of
someone
.
For instance
, a Japanese baby who was born in Japan, but since child lives in The Unit States with his family, if the family do not maintain the tradition of Japan inside of the house, certainly
this
child will grow up with the American and occidental traditions because the ambience around his has much more
influence
than original
country
. In my opinion, other aspects are much more responsible for the experience of
someone
than the origin
country
. In conclusion, there are many items responsible for moulding the perception of
someone
and sometimes the original place can have less or more
influence
depend on how these items are motivated.
This
essay argued how a
country
can determine the experience of
someone
.
Submitted by larissafelipin on

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