Even though doctors all over the world would agree that fast food is bad for people’s health, more and more people are eating it. Why are more people eating fast food? What can be done about this problem?

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There is a fact that despite several warnings from medical practitioners about the negative effects of fast food on people's health even though, more and more people are consumed.

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essay discusses the reason and how to tackle

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problem for the following reasons.

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of the problems of eating

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food is days nowadays, folks do not have much more time to cook at home because they have a lot of commitments

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, they can easily buy

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bread from shops. Another reason is these kinds of meals price is easily affordable

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means very cheap rather than health grains rate.

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, McDonald's

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burger price is $5.99 but the salads rate is over $ 10.

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, people like to eat their's favourite foodstuff at minimum cost. These are the reasons for eating too many fast snacks. There are two possible solutions are available.

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possible remedy is the fast-food snack shops might be added healthy bread

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of adverse cuisine

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, more and more folks might be used back healthy dinner.

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, Doughnuts shop has added salads to their's menu in order to the family would like to buy and eat. Another solution is the parents should teach to their's kids which is what are the negative effects of containing in

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foods and the parents should arrange to their's work-life balance in order to they have a free time, they might be cooked for their's kids which is healthiest

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. To conclude,in my opinion about

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, certainly, the population should be avoided to eating

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cuisine because

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can lead to getting adverse effects on folk's strength. These are the two remedies that are most helpful to reduce the eating ratio, I hope

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trend is conducive to the

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generation.

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Even though doctors all over the world would agree that fast food is bad for people’s health, more and more people are eating it. Why are more people eating fast food? What can be done about this problem?

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