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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently stayed at a hotel during a business trip. After returning home, you realize that you left a personal item in your room. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter: Describe the item you left behind Explain where you think the item might be Suggest how the hotel can return the item to you Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
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 to let you know that I have left my personal
belonging
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that is
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 my black leather
jacket
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of
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from
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 Zara in
the
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room number 401 where I was staying for 2 days. It has two side pockets and the company brand name written with white and blue threads at the back of it. What makes the
jacket
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 unique is its zip which is multicolor. I hope you will consider my situation favourably. Let me explain where I might have kept my
jacket
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?
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 I remember
last
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 night when I went to have my dinner I was wearing the same
jacket
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 with blue jeans. And, when I came back to the hotel I
then
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 kept it inside the closet.
However
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, when I was packing my stuff I took it out from the closet and kept it on the wooden chair which was beside the bed. Would you kindly check the room specifically on the chair which is near the bed
.
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 The
jacket
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 is expensive and rear collection so if you
will
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find it and return
to
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it to
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 me I will highly appreciate your efforts. Please contact me
on
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at
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 456-789-6788 or email me at [email protected]. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Shweta Bhat
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that you maintain a single idea per paragraph to enhance clarity and ease of reading.
task achievement
Try providing more details about how you would like to receive the item (e.g., via mailing service, picking it up, etc.).
coherence cohesion
The letter contains a clear and polite greeting and closing, which enhances the formal tone of the correspondence.
task achievement
The task response is complete, with the item well-described and a clear request for its return.
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