With an increasing overweight population some think universities should make sport a compulsory module on all degree courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Obesity has turned into a pandemic in
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modern world and there is an upward surge in the number of people who are overweight; with Linking Words
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in mind, it is argued by some that sports activities must be made a mandatory part of all degree programs. I completely agree and believe that Linking Words
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would only positively impact the pupil.
With the increase in the workload on the students graduating from high school to colleges, most find it difficult to cope up with the sheer volume of work and forgets to stay active. Linking Words
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, ‘freshmen fifteen’ is a phenomenon common in the United States where university students gain an extra fifteen kilograms in the Linking Words
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, with sports being integrated into their school timetables, the freshmen would have allotted time for workouts; Linking Words
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in turn would give them no excuse to skip lessons.
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get to be a part of various teams and form bonds with others; Linking Words
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helps with the loneliness that most tend to experience in the Linking Words
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few months of being away from home. It gives them a feeling of being a part of a team and improves morale in general. A study Linking Words
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by Oxford University in 2020 established that ninety-five per cent of students were happier in universities where sports activities were made obligatory.
In conclusion, moulding the young mind is the responsibility of the school and they should do their best to keep the kids in good health, be it mentally or physically and Add the auxiliary verb
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rule would be a step in the right direction.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite