Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requriement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste.

Humans are inevitably resistant to changes in their ways of life. Some
people
acknowledge that the required amount of waste is not being recycled and
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, it is essential for
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to take the charge of
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law for exercising recycling.
Firstly
, in my opinion,
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must take action in order to encourage
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recycling since
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people
do not process it on their own to a needed level.
Moreover
, a large chunk of recyclable materials is extracted from
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households, making them a huge contributor.To illustrate, Japanese homes recycle 90% of their aluminium materials,which was 55%, after the introduction of tax redeeming law on recyclable products. It is because of the increased pollution in
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and productive pressure on industries, it is imperative for governments to take the issue
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their hands. Since, we have seen in the past that
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those opinions are forged into laws.
Secondly
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but
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for
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helping governments to segregate
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recyclable products.
For instance
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in Germany provides
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of 2%, if customers recycle their previous used canned
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into the vending machine. In my view,
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all by itself cannot achieve the result without the help of the private sector.
Furthermore
, it is a paramount job for
people
to reduced carbon footprints,
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people
cannot achieve
this
target on their own without the intervention of governments. To conclude, it is lucrative for
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to intervene in
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situation, where it can have
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leverage of collecting taxes when a certain quantity of recyclable material is not achieved and simultaneously
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will help humanity in reducing pollutants into
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environment
and will encourage the judicial use of our resources.
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