Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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arts

is increasing in the society. from my

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believe that the listed reasons would support

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music and theatre rather than the governments putting so much money in the public services :

firstly

, you would agree with me that music is a way of

life

,

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the use of

this

could bring better

relazation

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relaxation

realization

, promotes health and reduces fears of dangers that could occur.

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with the use of art which has been in recent, music has made gathering a better

place

and has

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on individuals,

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, with the creative

nature

of

arts

and designs,

this

has brought so much

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awareness

of the importance of

nature

that can actually be described.

secondly

,

nature

has been part of

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culture that has so

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values and believes in our western world,

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culture stands a greater

place

in the

life

of so many people and they have

practice

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it for

a longer periods

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of time which is still in

place

, most of the creatures seen has explained

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meaning of

life

,

also

the demand for

such

creatures has brought

alot

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a lot

lot

of comforts in the

life

of so many individuals who

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in the

nature

of culture. In a nutshell,

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believe that

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of

arts

has a great impact on

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individual daily living that has so

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advantages to

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disadvantages.

Arts

is a

nature

of

life

and it will continue to remain in

place

as long as there

is

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people in the society to appreciate them.