Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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music and theatre rather than the governments putting so much money in the public services :

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that can actually be described.

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individual daily living that has so

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disadvantages.

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and it will continue to remain in

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as long as there

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people in the society to appreciate them.