In the future ,we will havr more and more leisure time as machines replace many of the tasks we do at home amd at work.Discuss thr challenges and benefits this will bring

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modern life individuals have less leisure because of their hectic

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. No doubt, we will have more free

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because

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of technology all the man

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is done by the different

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of

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. In these days,

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complete

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at a very fast rate because of telecommunication. Due to

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face provocation and some get benefit from

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. Let us discuss briefly. To embark upon, unfurling some challenges that

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and foremost, in many industries all the heavy

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is done by

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and the requirement of mankind are reduced. By

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, many

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can not able to find another job.

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, the unemployment of the nation could be inclined. According to the survey conducted by

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25% of employees lost their job because of technology.

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, companies can not give more preference to their skilled worker

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,there are some benefits of using

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, in many industries

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have to do lots of

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hour but with the help of

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machines

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they can complete

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and

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within the instant limit.

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,

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have more

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because it is not required to do

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all the

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since

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can do everything.

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,

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can focus on other household

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and physical activities.

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, they can spend more

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with their families and

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focus on their children.

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it can be seen that 30% of

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can help with their families in their personal

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. In conclusion,

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there are some challenges that individuals face because job opportunities are reduced

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but

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can complete lots of

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because sometimes

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not

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but technology can do it easily