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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Past century the magazine was the best method to read reports.
Nevertheless
, nowadays public has other
media
 to read
information
such
 as social
media
,
news
 sites.Some individuals still prefer journals, else consider other social
media
.
Firstly
,Newspaper can only give
information
 about specific areas and it's harmful to the environment.
Thus
 magazine uses papers made from wood.
On the other hand
news
 sites have no use of paper and people can see anywhere, anytime if they had the only internet.
Therefore
 Mongolian users can read about the happening in the USA or any part of the world .
Moreover
 social platform ,televisions are way quicker than newspapers.
As a result
 who uses other platforms to learn
news
 always can be informative and got fresh
information
 around the world.
Although
, Magazines are slower and not widely than other sources of
media
.
However
, that
news
 will be written no Grammarly mistakes and more easily understandable who graduated journal in university.
Therefore
 people who prefer newspapers will always read quality
news
 than else and outstand other sources of
media
.
Furthermore
, other platforms can give misinformation or false reports.In ,contrast newscasts will filter and judge the
information
 is true or false.
Besides
 youngsters can be educated and improve their grammar and spelling. In conclusion, both channels of journalism have owned their merits and demerits.
However
,
i
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 personally think new modern technology will replace traditional approaches but it has still got a significant role to play.,
Moreover
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journals and newscasts are more reliable as compared to e-communications it is easy to spread false reports over the web.One should choose the appropriate option at his/her convenience.For ,me I will use both of them as my source of
news
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • news coverage
  • perspectives
  • opinions
  • accessed
  • interactive
  • engaging
  • real-time
  • multimedia
  • combination
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