You recently applied for two separate jobs. Both have chosen to hire you, but you must write a letter to one of them explaining why you are unable to take the position. Include in your letter: – An apology – An explanation of your situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to apologise for not being able to accept the position offered by your institute
.
I am grateful to you for allowing me to join your organisation as a lecturer; however
, I could not accept this
job
position. Although
I have been waiting for this
golden opportunity to work at your institute
, I have accepted another job
offer which is more convenient for my career. Therefore
, I deeply regret if it causes any inconvenience to you.
I would like to explain the reasons for accepting another job
as a nursing coordinator at a University. It would take only 15 minutes to reach me at work, and also
offers me a good job
position which would assist me in getting a placement in a foreign country which is my major goal of life. Besides
it
, I would get a chance to visit other countries Correct pronoun usage
that
along with
a holiday pacakage
every year. Correct your spelling
package
Hence
, these attractive opportunities tempt me to join it
.
Correct pronoun usage
them
This
was a difficult decision for me because your institute
was ready to give me various benefits in the form of early promotion and high wages. I am well aware about
the reputation of your educational Change the preposition
of
institute
, thereby, looking forward to work
with you in future.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Amandeep KaurChange the verb form
working
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task achievement
The letter effectively includes an apology and a clear explanation of the situation, fulfilling the task requirements well.
coherence cohesion
While the letter flows well, consider adding transitional phrases to further improve the coherence between paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear and logical structure, making it easy to follow the writer's points.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately formal and polite, fitting the context of the letter.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, contributing to the overall clarity of the letter.
task achievement
The response is complete and addresses the task fully, including an apology and an explanation.
task achievement
The writing tone is polite and respectful, which is suitable for an apology letter.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.